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Learning from the Historical Fiction of Other Writers
10. December 2011 by Nancy Pinard.
I’m just finishing up a debut novel by Debra Dean called The Madonnas of Leningrad, a must-read for art lovers and anyone who wants to know what it was like to survive the terrible winter of the Nazi seige of Leningrad. The protagonist is a docent in Leningrad’s enormous museum called The Hermitage, but as the Nazis descend, she is called upon to help pack up the art works to be shipped to a safe location, then to spy out fires set by Nazi bombs, then to maintain a water-soaked building.
Juxtaposed against this story in intermittent chapters is the story of her marriage and descent into Alzheimers in old age.
The dramatic fracture the juxtaposition causes is not disorienting, though I am continually evaluating which story most intrigues me. The stories each inform the other, so for example, the Leningrad material gradually reveals how the marriage actually came about, and the Alzheimer’s story (interesting in itself) is delivering material that might be delivered in an epilogue in a linear novel.
In addition to the time being fractured, so is place. The historical Leningrad setting is radically different from the contemporary American locale of the Alzheimer’s story, where we meet the protagonists eventual family as they meet for a wedding and struggle to deal with the problem of how to secure their elderly parents’ increasingly endangered lives.
(Being an art lover myself, an additional intrigue is all the named paintings. Many of the paintings I’ve seen in person–living in a city with a wonderful art museum as well as traveling to many I’m wanting to reread the book with a computer so I can examine all the details.)
The madonna motif is presented in many paintings, then completed by the mysterious pregnancy of the protagonist, this in utero character appearing as an adult in the contemporary story.
I really love this novel. Though the protagonist is not a famous person as in my fictional biographies, the structure serves as a paradigm for a way to set up a life where the time frame is not limited to 17 months as in my Darwin novel.
Here’s the Hermitage Museum website:
http://www.hermitagemuseum.org/
Here’s an interesting interview with the author where she describes her process:
http://conversationsfamouswriters.blogspot.com/2006/03/debra-dean-madonnas-of-leningrad.html
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Grappling with Gaps in the Record
1. December 2011 by Nancy Pinard.
In keeping with my resolve not to change the historical record where it exists, I still wrestle with how to handle the gaps. The writing of fictional biography gives me some license, of course, but I mostly interpret that to mean that I am imagining the scenes that are suggested by the historical record and making up the dialogue. I’m also inventing characteristics and histories for minor characters who are documented in the record, but about whom little is written. Mrs. Grut is an example, in my Darwin book. She was the children’s governess at a critical time in the Darwin household and appears in the Darwin letters but in no other place. I knew she tried to make a proper Victorian household out of Emma Darwin’s fun house full of children–to the chagrin and detriment of all. I had to create a character who was motivated to put things in order and provoke consternation. Okay. I’m fine with that.
What I find more troubling is a matter like Mileva Maric’s sister Zorka, who was known to have developed something like schizophrenia. What I don’t know is when it developed. I can read statistics on when young women typically develop symptoms and I can read letters, but it seems that as soon as I write her into a scene with symptoms at an age of onset consistent with statistics, I read that Milos Maric (Mileva’s father) sent all his children abroad to school. Now, how likely is it that an 18-year-old would thrive abroad at school with symptoms of schizophrenia? I’m certain that Zorka was suffering symptoms by age 24, but then, after that, she went to help Mileva with the children during periods of Mileva’s debilitation after Einstein left the family. It doesn’t make sense to me that someone with unmedicated schizophrenia would be able to run a household with young children.
Perhaps the diagnosis is wrong. Zorka was in Serbia and would have been hidden in the attic like Mrs. Rochester in Jane Eyre to avoid sending her to some brutal asylum where, at that time, she would have been chained to a wall or confined in some torture device and possibly put on public display like at Bedlam Hospital in England. Zorka would not have been seen by a professional until later, when she went to Zurich and was treated at the Burgholzli Psychiatric Hospital, where the Einstein’s son Eduard, also schizophrenic, was interred at times. So, there was a serious dysfunction of a psychological nature, which eventually Zorka self-medicated with alcohol, but it seemed to relapse at times. One relative/neighbor interviewed by Michele Zackheim for her book Einstein’s Daughter said that before Mileva came home to visit her in later life, Zorka stopped drinking and put the house in order. There’s volition, devotion, and shame in that behavior. She knew she didn’t want Mileva to see how she was living. Is that kind of self-awareness typical of schizophrenia?
There are two other bits of data that make me put age of onset sooner rather than later. One is that when Mileva, already pregnant with Lieserl and still unmarried, traveled from Serbia to Switzerland to visit Albert in secret, he sent her a book on hypnotism by Auguste Forel who was then the director of the Burgholzli. Why that book? While it is true that Mileva took a psychology course at some point in her education, they were not known to have read and discussed anything but physics together, so it seems out of context unless Mileva had requested he send her anything he could find to help her help Zorka. He was in Schaffhausen, tutoring a young Englishman, and living in a household with a family. Perhaps it was the only remotely relevant book he could find in a Schaffhausen library.
Conjecture.
The other data bit that makes me wonder about early onset for Zorka is that after Mileva’s baby was born, Albert and Mileva considered putting her up for adoption. Why would they not have asked the Maric family to keep the baby? She had already caused them shame by the fact of her unwed pregnancy. They were wealthy and had servants, though Marija Maric (Mileva’s mother) continued to help with all house and farm work. That means she was healthy. The little girl lived there for 18 months, which seems a long time if she was going to be given up. Perhaps Mileva’s parents couldn’t handle another dependent in addition to Zorka?
It’s all puzzling. Then there is the fate of Lieserl–another unknown–except that Mileva clearly knows what happened to her and she’s a point-of-view character, so how do I get around that one? I’m leaning heavily on Michele Zackheim’s interviews with family members and friends in Einstein’s Daughter, though I’m not certain how to explain a few things there, either. For example, if Lieserl was born with Downs Syndrome–as Albert seems to have reported to a colleague later in his life–why would Albert have at the time written “I’m very sorry about what has befallen Lieserl. It’s so easy to suffer lasting effects from scarlet fever.” To me, this sounds as though scarlet fever caused a disability she didn’t have before. If Lieserl had died of the scarlet fever (lasting effect, indeed!), he would not have written the sentences that follow: “As what is the child registered? We must take precautions that problems don’t arise for her later.”
What is the likelihood that Lieserl was a Downs baby? 95% of Downs children are born to older mothers with no hereditary component. Mileva was 25 at the time of conception. The percentage of Downs children born due to other factors is 2-3% and then, only 1 in 3 due to a hereditary defect in one parent. The fact that their third child was schizophrenic then, hardly seems to be related.
And, if Lieserl had been born a Downs baby, would Albert have been pleased when Mileva got pregnant a second time, after they were married? Even without a hereditary factor–likely not known at that time–wouldn’t the feelings be more complex at the thought of a second go-round? But that same letter begins “I’m not the least bit angry that poor Dollie [his nickname for Mileva] is hatching a new chick. In fact, I’m happy about it and had already given some thought to whether I shouldn’t see to it that you get a new Lieserl. . . . Brood on it very carefully so that something good will come of it.”
So what can I conclude that will satisfy the parameters in this letter? This is the primary source.
Posted in Michele Zackheim, Eduard Einstein, Zurich, Einstein's Daughter, Marija Maric, schizophrenia, Bulgholzli Psychiatric Hospital, Zorka Maric, Milos Maric, Auguste Forel, Serbia, reading, Mileva Maric, Fictional biography, historical fiction, Generating Fiction from History and/or Fact, point of view, writing | 2 Comments »
Ahhh, Bern
26. September 2011 by Nancy Pinard.
Bern is a medieval city that has changed little structurally since 1410 when a law was passed, after a fire that burned all the wooden buildings, that decreed all buildings be made of stone. Of course the old city now has contemporary shops and is connected by buses and trams to the new city, yet still, it retains its original character. The four main thoroughfares of the old city are covered in cobblestones and because the available stone, limestone, is porous, the eaves extend out farther than usual. Awnings that originally covered the carts of vendors have been assimilated into the architecture so that the walkways are now covered, forming arcades on either side of the streets.
As you can see, the city remains much as it was, including a series of eleven fountains, each centered around a painted statue, where women in 1901 without running water assembled to do washing.
Bern is where Albert wrote the five papers that established his reputation in the year 1905, his anus mirabilus, while he was working full-time at the Bern Patent Office, newly married (1903) to Mileva, and soon-to-be the father of Hans Albert. In his memoir, he records that these were the happy years. (Interesting that happiness is reported BEFORE the success for which he is famous. Hemingway also claimed the years before his acknowledgment, when married to Hadley Richardson, were his happiest.)
The apartment where Albert and Mileva lived when they were first married has been preserved as a tiny museum in two floors, those being what we would call the second and third floors.
You first enter two rooms of their apartment, one with a tiny fireplace and Albert’s desk from the Patent Office added, the other with table, chairs, grandfather clock, and photographs. All are wood and quite beautiful. The desk is the kind with cubbies, each filled with Albert’s belongings.
Between the two rooms in a little foyer is a closet with what appears to be Mileva’s wedding clothes and Hans Albert’s bassinet. While it might be possible to look at period furniture dispassionately, the fabric of the clothing and the bassinet connected me to the real family.
Up the original staircase is a room full of information about Einstein, all of which was familiar to me from reading biographies. It was my husband’s first initiation into the various particulars, so worthwhile for his participation and interest. (No, I don’t discuss my day’s work with him beyond whether it went well or haltingly. Though peculiarities in the research might come out, he doesn’t get the full gestalt until a trip such as this one or when reading the published book.)
The real treasure trove of content is in the Historical Museum here in Bern, housed in a castle and devoting an entire floor to Einstein. With video demonstrations, newsreel, photographs and artifacts, the museum recreates the context of his work, his life, his legacy.
The Theory of Special Relativity is explained in animations, step-by-step, on four screens, the viewer able to rewatch each one as many times as necessary to understand the concepts. This is the theory that presents the speed of light as the constant, and not space or time, as was previously thought. As a writer, I’m struck with how much of grasping the concept is the same as understanding point of view.
The artifacts that were of greatest interest to me were those that demonstrated the particulars of daily life. Seeing the heavy iron Mileva would have used, the telephone on which Albert might have called his mother, the stove that heated the rooms and old films of the trolley cars made the reality of their lives more palpable.
There were several rooms set up–a bedroom like where each lived in Zurich while in school, a store where Mileva might have shopped in Bern. Such exhibits prevent me from imagining/writing their lives in a 21st century, revisionist way.
Three facts I didn’t know emerged: Einstein’s father’s company was commissioned to light Oktoberfest with electricity–suggesting that Albert might have attended, especially the year it was first completed. I can imagine the moment of flipping that switch and seeing the grounds lit for the first time would be quite a sight.
I also learned that despite being aware that he was not a good marriage partner, Albert fell in love again in old age, after Elsa’s death, after his platonic relationship with his secretary Helen Dukas. His inamorata was a Princeton librarian, Johanna Fantova, aka Hannie, also a European refugee. He wrote her love poems like those he wrote to Mileva and liked to take her sailing–a lifelong passion akin to playing his violin. Fortunately for Hannie, they didn’t marry. He bemoaned in his memoir that he failed miserably at marriage. Twice.
Finally, I saw the will above. Mileva and Elsa were both dead before he died, so he provided $20,000 for his secretary, Helen Dukas, $20,000 for his step-daughter Margot (Elsa’s daughter), $15,000 for his son Eduard who was hospitalized in a psychiatric institution in Zurich, and $10,000 for his son Hans Albert, a hydro-geologist in California. Any remainder, including all proceeds from his literary estate, was left to Hebrew University in Jerusalem.
I will leave those numbers alone. They speak for themselves.
Posted in Margot Einstein, Elsa Einstein, Helen Dukas, Johanna Fantova, Ernest Hemingway, History Museum, Hadley Richardson, Eduard Einstein, Hans Albert Einstein, Special Theory of Relativity, Switzerland, Mileva Maric, Generating Fiction from History and/or Fact, Oktoberfest, Anus Mirabilus, Bern, Einstein | No Comments »
The Einstein Tour Part I, Lake Como
15. September 2011 by Nancy Pinard.
My husband and I arrived in Milan yesterday after the (for me) sleepless overnight flight that is penance for the luxury of European travel, meaning no taxi fare seemed too high if it meant we might settle in at our hotel sooner. And Tremezzo, the small village on the west shore of Lake Como, midlake, where I had booked our room, couldn’t have made it more worth it. What overwhelmed me more than the lake itself, is the geography of the basin it’s in. Carved out by a glacier, the foothills surround the lake are covered in lush foliage with darker vertical veins, which in the haze of humidity appear velvetine, like the iris petals in the flower paintings of Georgia O’Keefe.
On the lake shore, the Hotel Villa Marie, complete with its own cupola (on left, below), is the most picturesque in a row of tile-roofed and pastel-painted Italian villas.
This is not where Albert and Mileva stayed, though it’s one km from the Villa Carlotta where they disembarked from their ferry to tour the house and gardens. The ferry boats are still the most efficient means of transportation to various villages on the lake, so today Beloved and I boarded the “slow boat,” (Centro Lago in Italian), and took a gestalt tour of the mid-lake villages, including Bellagio, home to luxury shops, and Varenna, a charmingly-preserved fishing village with an 11th century stone chapel and unrestored 14th century frescoes. Tomorrow we will tour the Villa Carlotta. Today it was focused on what it feels like to be here. This morning, in addition to the lapping of water against the stone walls that separate the land from the lake, I heard the church bells ring two strokes with a non-melodious “clong.” I heard the rigging of the sailboats clinking against aluminun masts in the tiny harbor in front of the hotel, but masts were wood in 1901, so perhaps chattering would be a better word. Regrettably, the traffic noise is loud now on the road that wends around the lake. Albert, unlike Beloved, would not have needed to jerk Mileva from the path of drivers speeding around blind curves.
At our sidewalk cafe dinner last night we sat at a small table among many other couples at small tables, all speaking in whispers, until, as invariable happens with my friendly husband, we all began talking to one another. Beside us was a couple of honeymooners, obvious and perfect for imagining Albert and Mileva, though they were not yet married on their May, 1901 trip, but their heads likely inclined toward one another in the same way, though Albert didn’t drink so they wouldn’t have shared the same bottle of expensive wine, (red, of course.) Still, they might have lingered long, ordering each course and eating it before deciding on the next, sharing each as if unable yet to acknowledge different preferences, she serving out his helping first while he sat by helpless and helplessly in love.
Around these two sat three couples of oldlyweds, none of us jaded, I hope, but clearly in a different place as we lounged back in the wicker chairs, drinking from different liters of wine—his red, hers white, ordering not multiple courses—who can eat like that after 35?–but trying not to lick the plate of our measley one course apiece. One man called the rising, almost-full moon, the sun and told the groom to enjoy the next six months as if life would never be like that again. Perhaps not, but I didn’t sense regret from any table. The most senior were a couple from Wales and England, clearly enjoying their holiday together, though they were supposed to come six months earlier for a wedding and had to postpone for his illness. I was thinking how Mileva would have envied us all—the young lovers and the mature ones with our children grown and ably fending for themselves–she who was abandoned and left to care for a schizophrenic son.
Now my patient Beloved waits, out on the balcony of our room, overlooking the lake. The rocky tops of the Alps to the north—in fact in Switzerland—turn pink at sunset. His wife writes on, but it is dinner time and he is getting hungry. I suspect we will return to our same cafe, The Helvetia, because our Welsh and British friends—last night the end of their holiday here–confirm it has the freshest food in Tremezzo. The veal in mushrooms and wine the newlyweds were eating looked stupendous.
Posted in Generating Fiction from History and/or Fact, historical fiction, Tremezzo, Bellagio, Varenna, Italy, Lake Como, Einstein, Mileva Maric, Research methods, reading, writing | 1 Comment »
How much of this is true?
11. August 2011 by Nancy Pinard.
For the second time since I began writing fictional biography, someone said, “But how am I to know what’s true?” My answer is that the scenes are made up, the dialogue, the emotional movement, but the settings are as real as I can make them, and I don’t tamper with known facts–assuming they are recorded somewhere and that I have found them. I don’t change dates or rearrange events to my own ends, either. In the case of SANDWALK, my fictional biography of the Charles Darwin family during the 17 months preceding the publication of Origin, it was relatively straightforward, thanks to Darwin being such a frequent and thorough letter writer, available online at www.darwincorrespondenceproject.com, and their daughter Henrietta’s editing her mother’s letter collection into two volumes called Emma Darwin: A Century of Family Letters.
In the case of the Einstein book, it’s not so simple. The letters were written in German, for example, so I’m dependent on translations. And the executors of his estate were perhaps too conscientious in wanting to preserve Albert’s sainted image and destroyed much that was inconsistent with it. Consequently, for the period I’m writing about now–August, 1901-November 1901–after Mileva had failed her exams and went home pregnant to Vojvodina (Serbia) to tell her parents and the time she turned up in Stein am Rhein, Switzerland to be near Albert, letters were either never written (unlikely) or were destroyed. That means it’s up to me to figure out, based on what I can learn about her family and the cultural mores and religious values of Vojvodina in 1901, how that scene might have played with no help from actual accounts.
So, how does that work? As a novelist, I have to look to the end game. I know what happened to various family members, ultimately. I know that Mileva’s father, very successful in terms of worldly goods, owning as many as four farms in various sections of Serbia and two other houses as well, felt he had failed with his children, that they had betrayed him. I know that Mileva left Serbia to marry Albert after nearly dying, unwed, in childbirth with their first child Lieserl, that Albert never saw the baby, that she disappeared after age 2. I know that Mileva’s brother was assumed lost in WW I, but then turned up in Russia and became a professor in a university, though his fellow Serbs and family considered his abandonment traitorous. I know that her sister Zorka became schizophrenic and that she died on a bed of straw surrounded by 43 cats.
So, knowing those things, what can I assume about these people’s characters and their likely responses to Mileva’s news? Another interesting fact that seems totally out of context is that when Mileva was in residence at Stein am Rhein, Albert sent her two books. One was a book on hypnotism by Auguste Forel, the most recent director of the Burgholzli Mental Hospital in Zurich. Since nothing psychological has ever entered their letters before, what might that suggest? Mileva found the book disgusting, though she’s not very specific on that score. Perhaps because Forel was into eugenics? Or is that why he disgusts me?
That’s another problem, of course. The matter of being revisionist. I know that Forel’s work was used by Hitler, but it’s 1901 and no one knows that, yet. It’s got to be kept in mind.
So, therein lie a few of the problems and my manner of addressing them.
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